Metacognitive Thinking

I changed a few things from the first draft of my essay to my last. One of the things I changed was my wording. In some places from the original draft, I saw that what I said may not have made sense to someone who had not read And Then There Were None. While this was one thing that I had to change, I think that the comments on my timed writing helped me the most. This is because I could see what I had done wrong, and fix it as I wrote and corrected my writing. I think that getting feedback on future writing will help me improve as a writer as time goes on, so that I can fix my mistakes. I would like to get better at writing supports into essays. Whether this be a quote or an idea pulled from a text, incorporating it into my writing is not one of my strongest suits. Overall, I was given the opportunity to fix many written mistakes in my And Then There Were None essay, and I still have much room for growth.